Feedback from Pitch

After our pitch we got some feedback from our class

 

They said:

·     They liked the fact that our protagonist was a male

·     They liked our transition shots – where the titles come up

·     They liked our production company and logo

 

They said we could improve:

·     On how detailed our plot is

·     How the opening starts

·     Which sort of shots we use

 

Our production company and logo went down very well they liked

·     That the background was a cinema

·     The red stereotypical chairs

·     That our logo appeared on the screen

·     That the font stands out