Monday, 23 January 2017

Feedback For Our First Draft

Positives about our draft - How the titles appear during the car scene
                                        - The music used for comedic affect
                                        - Shots of people walking downstairs

What can be improved - Make Aiden's voiceover louder
                                     - Add the roles of each member
                                     - Add the production company logo at some point.

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